The dialogue feels like it was written by Tommy Wiseu (who coincidentally bears a strong physical resemblance to the protatonist in this instance), and the pacing is no less jarring and awkward. The dialogue in the fight scene with the two goons, oh my god don't get me started. The ending seemed to imagine itself as climactic, but the twist (I guess?) wasn't impactful and it was all very rushed.
The scan is fine, the service was (as always) great, but the story was certainly not the best.