It's fine, less cluttered than the official. But I'm not sure I would use this at my home tables. The majority of the combat information is on the second page which is confusing despite saving throws and initiative being on the first page, this could leave to constant flipping and confusion during combat. Some other confusing decisions like placing the Attack Bonus table underneath the Defensive Abilities & Class Features which the latter is next to the AC Bonus table and the Attack Bonus table is above the Offensive Abilities & Class Features, why not have the Armor Class and the Attack Bonus tables next to each other and the Class Feature tables group by themselves? Iunno. I wouldn't say this is improved but merely a different take; one that doesn't work for me. took a look at the "Revised" version and It has the same layout issues that bugged me plus the switch from traditional B/W Character sheet to a obscenely garish white and light gray, might save you on ink but in it's pdf form it was way too bright to be usable.

Dissapointed in the binding, Cheaper than finding the original print but you would need to hire someone to rebind the book as the pages will fall out. I wish Drivethru RPG would have the option to choose bindings. I like to have my books intact for a long time.